[請益] 轉職自傳求批

看板Eng-Class作者 (joyca)時間7年前 (2016/07/04 04:34), 7年前編輯推噓1(1011)
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Name Cell:XXXX-XXX-XXX。Email: XXXXXXXXX@gmail.com EDUCATION -XX University -Bachelor of Aerospace Engineering 2011/Jun SKILLS -Good experience in product design(plastic) -Catia V6-3D Modeling (Solid, Surfacing, Assembly), 2D Drawing -Can work on Catia V6, Auto CAD, familiar with Pro-E, Solid works & Ansys -Design & Engineering problem discuss & solving with customer & related units STRENGTH AND ABILITES -3-year experience in product design -Development & Mass Production phase issue solving (design change) -Concept development & validation(feasibility check是否較好?) -Thorough knowledge in Product Design (mold, assembly, performance,regulation, feasibility check) -Good skill and speed in 3D Modeling & 2D Drawings -Prepare the engineering product drawings with tolerance, spec. , assembly guidance, secondary processing etc. -OO & ## experienced(In XX project) (OO & ## 在 XX專案中有過實作經驗,但仍不熟悉,不知是否可以如此描述) WORK EXPERINECE Company Name :XX Industrial 2012/Oct ~ 2015/Oct Designation :Design engineer Company Profile:XX product manufacturer, OEM Domestic market share over XX%. Oversea Customer Include XX,XX,XX,XX etc. Project Undertaken: (專案經歷分為三項) Independent design (Major design): (主要想強調獨立設計,是否有其他較好的描述方式) -型號-種別 Collaborative Design: (協同設計,協助設計) -型號-種類 Development & Mass Production phase: (開發&量產階段) -型號-種類 International Work Experience: XX onsite design - USA,Michigan 2015/May ~ 2015/Jul XX OO文件 signed - China,Shanghai 2014/Jun 另外如在國內與國外客戶以視訊方式協助,是否可列在此項,有無較好的描述方式 以上,再麻煩各位版友們的協助了,感謝! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 111.185.176.50 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1467578044.A.CE0.html

07/04 15:26, , 1F
有部分有問題 但是這是簡歷 不是自傳 你的skills那
07/04 15:26, 1F

07/04 15:26, , 2F
邊可以全部刪掉然後換到你 experience的地方 這樣有 c
07/04 15:26, 2F

07/04 15:26, , 3F
ontext
07/04 15:26, 3F

07/04 15:27, , 4F
其他看起來有問題的地方不確定是不是錯因為跟你不同
07/04 15:27, 4F

07/04 15:27, , 5F
科系
07/04 15:27, 5F

07/04 15:28, , 6F
上面說錯 是 strength and ability不是 skills
07/04 15:28, 6F

07/05 04:42, , 7F
這不是自傳 是履歷
07/05 04:42, 7F

07/05 04:49, , 8F
要改的地方太多了,建議先參考國外的履歷改
07/05 04:49, 8F

07/05 04:51, , 9F
履歷多用動詞為開頭 你很多句子都只是把一堆名詞寫出
07/05 04:51, 9F

07/05 04:51, , 10F
根本不是句子
07/05 04:51, 10F
謝謝指正,有推薦的履歷可參考嗎?這樣比較抓的出來您覺得好的謝法。小弟是參考幾份 國外履歷寫出來的 ※ 編輯: joyca (111.185.176.50), 07/05/2016 12:35:29

07/05 21:34, , 11F
精簡到連冠詞都沒了,不用批啦。專業履歷重精簡,關
07/05 21:34, 11F

07/05 21:34, , 12F
鍵字要被資料庫工具篩到,理工的,科技都走精簡風。
07/05 21:34, 12F
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