Re: [求譯] 想把自己寫的詞，翻成英文

看板Eng-Class作者softseaweed (Gladys von Wackenheim)時間8年前 (2016/02/25 20:50)推噓6(6推 0噓 6→)

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翻譯時跳脫跟原文1:1的翻法是個很好的思考模式，可以多想想 ※ 引述《RevanKai (GLAV)》之銘言： : 大家好，我寫了一個詞想翻成英文的 : 但是自己本身不是英文相關科系，英文也不是到很強 : 想說不知道能不能來這邊問問看，自己中翻英有沒有哪裡翻錯的地方~ : Hunger and toil darken my sight cruelly : 飢餓與勞苦黯淡了視線 Hunger and toil darkened my sight cruelly很不需要 : Utopia tell a lie,we will get blessed but… : 烏托邦的幸福，終究是個謊言(背叛) The bliss of Utopia is a lie at its core 這邊的but這樣讓句子懸空會應該會讓全球英文老師集體落淚 : Don’t you see the thin and weak die on the road? : 你曾看到那虛弱的人們死在路旁? Have you seen the fragile lie breathless on the road? : How many people get killed by injustice? : 有多少平民含冤而死? How many have died through injustice? : False and exaggerating ideal(future) has been broken : 虛假的言語和誇大的理想已經破滅 False words and bloated ideals undone : Why should I keep on believing your word? : 叫我該如何繼續相信你說的? How would you have my faith? : Family have been no smile anymore : 家人已經不再露出笑容過 The family lost their smiles : Friends frowned and no longer expect morn. : 朋友們也不再期待明天 and the friends lost their hopes : Can I see the next sunshine when I wake up tomorrow? : 我還可以見到朝陽在我醒來的隔天嗎? Can I wake to the dawn next day? : If only all of these just a nightmare. : 但願一切都只是個噩夢 If only it were a nightmare : Twilight has risen.The determine of awake from incubus is : 暮光已經升起，從惡夢中醒來的決心是幕光通常代表黃昏時刻的太陽光，不過你硬要這樣用也無非不可 incubus雖然字典裡寫夢魘，不過實際上是男魅魔，在女性睡夢中強制發生關係的惡魔 Twilight shone, and the end of nightmare marked a resolution : “Never being fear authority” : 不再畏懼任何權勢 Fear the authority no more : We will cultivate frail happiness by ourselves : 幼小(孱弱)的幸福，我們將自力悉心栽培 The frail happiness we shall nurture ourselves : Without consign anyone : 部在假手任何人 consigning to no others : Era of deceive has been end : 欺騙的時代已經結束 The era of deception has ended : Dark finally will perish. : 邪惡的勢力終將滅亡 The dark will perish : 請多多指教:D --- ... --

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