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看板Eng-Class作者 (我在彰化*吃肉圓)時間10年前 (2015/07/16 19:23), 編輯推噓0(0011)
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英文寫作沒有很好,請大家幫忙改一下,謝謝 Hello, I would like to tell you a little bit about myself. My name is XXX. I graduated from XXX University with Chemistry bachelor’s degree in Chemistry. I had worked at Kitchen for 1 year and 6 months in Australia. As a kitchen hand, I must have to learn everything as soon as possible. I had to prepare the food for chef, to move the stuff. 我要準備食物,搬貨物。 Besides, I was in charge of order the stuff or refund the wrong stuff. The reason why I choose the Working holiday in Australia is earning more money, knowing the different culture. 除此之外,我要負責訂貨退貨。我選擇澳洲打工度假的原因是,賺錢,體驗 不同的文化。 I had worked at XXX as an assistant engineer for almost 2 years. The job is about to clean the machine, measure the vibration of the machine and communicate with the Miss of assemble-line what is the proper time to maintenance. 我在某公司當助理工程師兩年。工作內容是清潔機台,量測機台的震度, 和小姐交涉,在適當的時機,作機台保養。 My strength is that I’m a fast learner, cautious and multi-tasking. I hope I can join your team. Thanks for your listening. 我的優點是學得很快,細心謹慎、可以多工處理。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 111.251.194.187 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1437045782.A.330.html

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第二句是?? 為啥要兩個chemistry
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07/17 01:01, , 2F
one and half a year
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07/17 01:03, , 3F
must跟have to選一個用就好 不要一起
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07/17 01:05, , 4F
for the chef 或 for chefs
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07/17 01:08, , 5F
in charge of後面要接v-ing
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07/17 01:09, , 6F
體驗我會用experience不會用know..
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07/17 01:11, , 7F
be about to有別的意思 是即將的意思 不確定你這樣適
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不適合
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07/17 01:13, , 9F
是我會about後面v-ing
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07/17 01:15, , 10F
是assembly line
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07/18 21:08, , 11F
謝謝
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