[文法] 一小段對話被說文法錯很多orz

看板Eng-Class作者 (掛網中請勿拍打餵食)時間12年前 (2013/10/28 03:59), 編輯推噓1(107)
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雖然我很久沒碰英文了 但感覺都是很簡單的文法 不知道所謂的錯很多錯在哪 ˊ口ˋ 為了表示誠意...如果幫忙找出一個錯誤 奉上微薄的50P 謝謝 >"< Choco: This birthday cake looks so good, I think I should give it a try. Lee: Oh, it's very delicious. The roast chicken is delicious. Maybe you can try some! Choco: Sure! Thank you! I'll try some. By the way, my name is Choco. Nice to meet you. Lee: I'm Lee. Nice to meet you, too. I'm a chef work in the restaurant next street. You look so young...What do you do? Are you still student? Choco: Yes, I'm studying in Japanese now. The star and I are classmates of collage. How about you? Lee: Oh, I'm his elder brother. Hey, your basketball shoes are very cool! Are you interesting in basketball? Choco: Yes! I like Michael Jordan the most. And you? What's your hobby? Lee: I enjoy cooking. All my friend love what I cook. My dream is to be a great cook. Choco: That sounds great! Oops, sorry, I have to go to find my friends. I lost them for a moment. Lee: Sure, do you need some help? What are they wearing? Choco: They are both tall and thin, wearing in white and black hats. Lee: I saw them in the toilet 5 minutes before. Maybe you can find them that way. Choco: Thank you! Nice talking to you. See you later! Lee: Me too. See you later! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.253.93.246 ※ 編輯: diddy 來自: 111.253.93.246 (10/28 04:18)

10/28 06:00, , 1F
I'm a chef work in the restaurant next street. 雙動詞
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10/28 06:00, , 2F
,其實真的蠻多的....
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10/28 13:08, , 3F
你大概要準備一千批喔......
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10/28 13:46, , 4F
B大幫我改文法的確有錯的部份算起來是六個 沒有到1000P吧XD
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10/28 13:47, , 5F
但他好認真的幫忙改! 所以我包了稅前整數1000P以示感激
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10/28 14:16, , 6F
對呀,你這麼有誠意,人家回答的也爽。太多人把這當成英文
10/28 14:16, 6F

10/28 14:16, , 7F
提款機了,問了問題就跑…
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10/28 14:44, , 8F
真的超感謝B大的 還幫我解惑一些不清楚的地方 人真好!>_<
10/28 14:44, 8F
文章代碼(AID): #1IRN2C99 (Eng-Class)
文章代碼(AID): #1IRN2C99 (Eng-Class)