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How I Wish I have.........
The topic reminds me of motto "stay hungry stay foolish.I most worship person
that is Steve Jobs.He was the chairman of Apple computer. The motto of Steve
Jobs was stay hungry stay foolish,the motto affect my life.Steve Jobs said "
you got to find what you love".He had much kownledge and unlimited creativity
than others,because he was always learned something he loved,although he
nerver graduated from college.
When Steve Jobs was young,he dropped out he could stop taking the required
classes that didn't interested him , begin dropping in on the ones that looked
interesting.For example,he learned srief and san srief typefaces.None of this
had even in hop of any practical application in his life.But ten years later,
when he was desining Mac computer,it all came back to him.It was the first
computer with beautiful typography.If he had nerver have dropped in that
single course in college.The Mac would had never have mutiple typefaces f
ronts.
Steve Jobs brought us two spirits.The first spirit,you got to find what you
love.When Steve Jobs was young,he was always focused on something wihch he
loved.Finally,his life experience became successful experience.The second
spirit,each stage of effort will became foundation of success in the furture.
When Steve Jobs in college,it was impossible connect the dots looking forward.
But it was very , very clear looking backward ten years later.Again,you can't
connect the dots looking forward;but you can connect them looking backwards.
So you have to trust that the dots will somewhere connect in your furture.
Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish. How I wish I have done it.
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