[請益] Cover letter 內容修改和問題
大家好
小妹想應徵外國公司的業務專員.
以下是我的求職信.是否可以請大家幫我看一下.
謝謝你們^+^
Dear Ms. Lee,
Your advertisement in 104 for an account sales specialist prompted me to
apply for this position.
After I graduated from National Chung Hsing University with a Bechelor of
Chemistry three years ago. I'd worked at family's company as an accounting
assistant for one year. And then, I'd worked at Merck Ltd.．Taiwan as a
customer care specialist. In addiion, I'm a proactive person, who is ready to
learn anything will be needed.
I don't feel that I should set my own salary, as I am pleased enough to have
the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month
satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.
May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? I have
enclosed my resume for more details about my background. Thank you very much.
Sincerely,
有沒有哪裡需要修改的,請指導XDDD 謝謝~
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