Re: [請益] 做一些修改了，謝謝各位的幫忙!
※ 引述《kikigirl (草莓心)》之銘言：
: Good morning everyone. I'm Fansi . I am so excited to be here for your
My name is Fansi.
口語 I'm Fansi = I'm fancy = 我很花俏 XD
: interview.
: I was born in Hsinchu .I graduated from National Hsinchu University of
: Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a
majored
: preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. With ex-working experience, I
, for five years.
used to work...for five years 不好，用逗號隔開
While working there, I learned
teamwork.
[這樣改你的句子變的太短，需要加一點東西，如 the importance of teamwork,
preparation, and cooperation 等等]
: have learned how to work in a team.
: I'm easygoing `friendly and responsible . In my spare time, I like to watch
, friendly, and responsible.
: movies、cook and reading. Traveling is the best choice to enrich my life.
, cook, and read. I also love to travel, I think it's a great way to
enrich my life.
[I'm easygoing, I like to do X, 那繼續 I 下去反而輕鬆]
: I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meet different
exciting
"life can be lively" 有點搞笑
: people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation
I think working in THSRC would be a dream job
for me.
: can realize my dream. So that's why I am here. Thank you for your attention.
如果這只是講來證明「我會英文」那差不多這樣就可以了。
但是這一段從頭到尾下來不到一分鐘，如果真的要用來自介那內容不足。
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'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life
Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die
-Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve
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