Re: [請益] 做一些修改了,謝謝各位的幫忙!

看板Eng-Class作者 (草莓心)時間14年前 (2012/01/31 01:06), 編輯推噓1(1011)
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當天的自我介紹朋友建議我不要死背,不要像念稿子一樣, 所以我應該會盡量口語一點?不知道是不是會比較好? 我想盡力就對了,因為當天面試有好多關卡阿,哈哈... 以下是我做的修改~ Good morning everyone. I'm Fansi . I am so excited to be here for your interview. I was born in Hsinchu .I graduated from National Hsinchu University of Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. With ex-working experience, I have learned how to work in a team. I'm easygoing `friendly and responsible . In my spare time, I like to watch movies、cook and reading. Traveling is the best choice to enrich my life. I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meet different people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation can realize my dream. So that's why I am here. Thank you for your attention. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 112.104.98.47

01/31 01:18, , 1F
英文裡沒有頓號喔要改成逗號但你是稿子沒關係只是提醒一下:)
01/31 01:18, 1F

01/31 01:29, , 2F
強調團隊精神這點很好。但是之前的工作經驗英文不太對.
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01/31 01:29, , 3F
寫文章的話,可以說By the aid of the previous work
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01/31 01:30, , 4F
experience, I have .....
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01/31 01:30, , 5F
但是口語的自我介紹可以說...Thanks for the previous
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01/31 01:31, , 6F
work experience, I learned how to work in a team
01/31 01:31, 6F

01/31 01:32, , 7F
and made this team work well...(後面這一句是標榜
01/31 01:32, 7F

01/31 01:33, , 8F
自己的能力)(洋人說話不會吝於誇獎自己...>_<~~)
01/31 01:33, 8F

01/31 01:35, , 9F
(有一個typo Thanks for..... experience. <--(是句點)
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01/31 01:46, , 10F
^_________^感謝喔!
01/31 01:46, 10F

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