[請益] 英文作文請幫忙修改!!!
以下是在有時間限制下寫出來的，所以部分可能辭不達意，請多包涵！！
很擔心很多文法其實是錯得但用得很爽......
拜託大大了！！
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The school authorities are alarmed by the fact that a large proportion of
students fail English test. According to the recent press coverage, more and
more students in Taiwan none the less have trouble communicating with foreigner
in English after they get their college degree. In the light of that, schools
have to take the initiate to improve their students' English ability. To
illustrate, it's well known that schools are going to make a stab at setting
a bar which is served as a stander to examine a qualified Bachelor. To say that
another way, students are forced to attend the test of English ability and meet
the requirement prior to graduating from university.
On top of that, in the duration of first year, the school authorities usually
set a necessary English course for the freshmen, which means people, whatever
the case, who enroll in the school have no alternative but to choose the class,
or those who reject the arrangement set by school will not acquire the diploma
four years later. With the legally binding aforementioned above, we have
realized that English ability have attracted lots of attention in the course of
learning English, and counting still.
However, pondering why students fail English test, as far as I am concerned,
there are some reasons to explain the question. To begin with, the way students
interact with teachers in the classroom usually leads to poor English. In most
situations, students just listen to and receive what teachers said instead of
responding opinions, much less articulating in English. Therefore, lack of
surroundings which is conducive to learn English must be one of the reasons
giving rise to students' fractured English. To go a step further, with the
advent of technology, students always take advantage of the translating tool
on the Internet. Hence, surfing the Internet has become the most common way by
which they solve the English assignments. Suffice it to say, the competitiveness
and the ability to master English are on the decrease. All in all, in the global
village, the ability to speak foreign language articulately has become a
requirement while applying for a job, let alone English is usually seen as a
basic foreign language. Thus, it's a virtual certainty that, in an effort to
enhance our competitiveness in an on-the-go society, mastering our English is
the best solution which is second to none.
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