Re: [請益] 英文作文請幫忙修改
※ 引述《jjpphwi (jjpphwi)》之銘言：
: Recently, a teenager was raped and murdered by a repeat sex offender who
repeated
: has just released from prison, which arose nationwide outrage and resulted
been released from a prison aroused
: in fear and fright of individuals, especially when we knew that among 74
fear of unknown infividuals
: released sex offenders, four are unconnected for. On the ground of that,
no for
: authorities concerned as well as child protection organization urged Minis
no as well as children by
: try of Interior amend the Sex Assault Protection Act to prevent the traged
to
: ies from happening again and child and women from potential threat posed by
children exposed to
: released sex offenders. Certainly, regulating a completed Act needs time to
complete takes
: discuss to, but I think it is necessary and urgent that government should ma
no to the
: ke proper measures to control the situation immediately, in my opinions, gov
In opinion the
: ernment can consider following suggestions as its priority.
: First of all, the released sex offenders should be forced to undergo compu
: lsory medical treatment continuously regardless of when they committed the c
the time they
: rimes. That is to say, the Act goes into effect retroactively.
: Besides, the procedure of report between a prison and a police station sho
: uld be faster and more effective than now .In addition, the polices are supp
no the 非指定
: osed to monitor the released sex offenders strictly and closely, undoubtedly,
,and undoubtedly
: those who committed sexual assaults and harassments are forced to report to
harassment
: relevant authorities on schedule simultaneously.
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: The Last but not the least, it must controversial to introduce the Taiwanes
even though it's controversial, we need to intr
: e version of Megan's Law. According to the Law, government has responsibiliti
the
: es to public personal information of released offender (ex-convicts). Of cou
publish offenders
: rse, some experts as well as Ministry of Interior consider this measure will
such as
: limit human rights extremely, in addition, it will contribute ex-convicts ha
extremely limit In contribute to no chances
: ve no chances opportunity to re-enter society. And What is worse, the releas
for ex-convicts to re-enter the society.
: ed sex offenders and their families maybe suffer from physical violence By con
may
: trast, those who are parents merely just want their children to be far away fr
no just
: om harm and we all know that the sex offenders have morbid psychology resultin
: g in committing again and again. That is, most of them are on a high recidivism
crimes In short, have a higher chance
to recidivate.
: rate. Consequently, the majority of people believe that publicizing the inform
: ation of released sex offenders is the best way to keep parents informed of po
: tential dangers. Government has duty to find a balance between protecting huma
The of protecting human
: n rights of both potential victims and former sex offenders.
rights between both A and B.
: Frankly speaking, the government's power has its limit and no matter how muc
no and 只有一句
: h detailed as well as strict the Act is. Obviously, it is just a punishment af
: ter the crimes. It is said that prevention is better than cure; therefore, wh
cures
: ether the Legislative Yuan decides to passed the amendment of Sex Assault Pro
pass
: tection Act or not, the top priority is that we should definitely enhance mut
take care of
: ual watch with each other. Only by doing so, do we live a life without fear e
each other. we will live
: ventually.
: 麻煩各位，可以幫我看一下嗎，謝謝
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