[文法] 真的很爛的文法需要指正謝謝

看板Eng-Class作者Freakbear (北兒)時間13年前 (2011/01/11 00:16)推噓2(2推 0噓 3→)

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小弟現在在上某地方的英文寫作課老師給了我們三個短句叫我們練習 sentence building 因為我文法超爛，也沒有甚麼構句的概念之前準備多益也只有練習聽跟讀（七百出頭），用說跟寫就會卡住了，很卡。而且感覺文法超錯誤連篇三個短句我花了一個半小時寫了又刪刪了又改，越加越長感覺變成小短文了在這鼓起勇氣po給各位老師看，希望能給我意見教我如何改進，謝謝 1. The man is an employee. 我：The young man who wears a stereotypical glasses and colorful tie, called Ryan,is an employee who join this company recently,full of enthusiasm,wants to do a great thing to earn approval and compliment from his colleagues and boss. 2.The managers are having a meeting. 我：The managers comes from different departments,such as Human Resourses Department,Adiministration Department,Marketing Department,etc,are having a extremely important annual meeting in the conference room at 6 floor. 3.Apple is a company. 我：Apple is a full of fashion and creativity company,which manufactured lots of fun,functional and efficient products.Such as Macbook,i Pod Touch, i Phone,etc.Some people even tattoo the "Apple logo"on their body.Apple always make waves impact the world when they release new products. 我知道亂七八糟，從今以後我會好好學習文法的，謝謝各位老師的指教 >.<" -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.228.40.155

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