Re: [請益] 作文用字

看板Eng-Class作者 (Sanctuary)時間15年前 (2010/10/15 18:44), 編輯推噓2(207)
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: From the materials presented, the author and lecturer are both discussing : TOPIC. However, they have little in common regarding the issue. The lecturer : considers this thesis in the passage allows of major disputes about all of the : three points. 我建議不必那樣拐彎抹角。 I have the following comments on the lecturer's view of the thesis. First, .... Second, .... Finally, .... : ----- : allows of major disputes about : 我有查到allow of no dispute,所以我原句可以表示有很大討論空間吧? : 介係詞用about還是over比較對? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 120.126.36.193

10/15 19:03, , 1F
冏...我覺得在衝字數的要求下,這樣已經漫破題了...
10/15 19:03, 1F

10/15 19:07, , 2F
考試作文不可能就降用一句話來作開頭段吧= =?
10/15 19:07, 2F

10/15 21:50, , 3F
我是不知道TOEFL改分數的軟體或是閱卷人員怎樣評分,不過
10/15 21:50, 3F

10/15 21:51, , 4F
我可以確定的是,每一本我看過的,講 profession writing
10/15 21:51, 4F

10/15 21:52, , 5F
(意思是相對於文學性的寫作),都建議不要冗言贅字。
10/15 21:52, 5F

10/15 21:55, , 6F
剛才寫太快:"professional writing 的書"
10/15 21:55, 6F

10/15 23:48, , 7F
推h大的"簡潔"。你如果文筆(文法?)不好,那光是first,
10/15 23:48, 7F

10/15 23:50, , 8F
second, finally都寫不出好東西了。先求簡單的東西寫
10/15 23:50, 8F

10/15 23:50, , 9F
的好,再來求華麗、衝字數、轉折等
10/15 23:50, 9F
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