[請益] 作文用字
最近在作托福整合寫作的模板，有些用字不太能確定這樣用合不合宜
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From the materials presented, the author and lecturer are both discussing
TOPIC. However, they have little in common regarding the issue. The lecturer
considers this thesis in the passage allows of major disputes about all of the
three points.
In the first place, the point that the professor disagrees with is that __O__ .
He holds the opinion that __X__ . Thus, from his angle, the professor rejects
the composer.
In addition, this man makes another point to argue that __OO__ is not exact at
all. He offers the explanation that __XX__. Hence, in light of this man, he
refutes the writer again.
Finally, the speaker underscores __xxx__ to deny the standpoint in the passage.
Although the article alleges __OOO__, yet the lecture indicates that __XXX__.
Therefore, according to the speaker, he rebuts the author over and over.
To conclude, the lecturer strikes the passage by contending that THESIS with
compact and concrete elaboration. The implausible points from the piece are
disproved by the convincing points from the discourse.
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allows of major disputes about
我有查到allow of no dispute，所以我原句可以表示有很大討論空間吧?
介係詞用about還是over比較對?
紫色三段這三句結束段落會不會怪怪的?
strikes the passage
strike可以接passage這種受詞嗎?
compact and concrete elaboration
這兩個形容詞一起會redundant嗎?
piece , discourse
這兩個詞拿來代換passage和lecture適合嗎?
article alleges , lecture indicates
allege跟indicate可以這樣用非人名詞當主詞嗎?
我知道有些詞要不時的代換，可是金底部分這種頻率會不會太刻意反而不好?
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