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題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to
specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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作文
After graduating from school, the final work people have to do is to find a
job. When the topic comes about "it is better to have broad knowledge of many
academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject", I guess most
of people would disagree with that because to specialize in one specific
subject is much easier to get a job. However, I agree with that it is better
to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects for a few reasons.
First of all, having broad knowledge of many academic subjects can be more
competitive. For example, my first job is doing research. I used the
knowledge I had learned from college and I thought it is enough. But, as a
big dissert happened to Taiwan, our research institution changed the plan on
research. Now, I have to learn the factors of how the dissert happens. These
are so unfamiliar to me and also learning the new knowledge takes time. I
have to work harder than people who already know that.
Second, having broad knowledge of many academic subjects can make us consider
things more complete. When we face a problem, if we have broad knowledge, we
can think for many views and make a better decision. For instance, I joined a
studying group, every time we discussed the homework which the professor gave
to us, students from different department would have different ideas and
answers. Therefore, I think if I have broad knowledge, I could understand the points others give to me and I could think
more complete.
The last reason is that only having broad knowledge can lead to specific
subject. We study at our young age, and how can that be possible for us to
know which one is more useful? Therefore, I think the only way for us to
choose the suitable job is to study many subjects. Having broad knowledge of
academic subjects can help us to choose the specific subject that we interest
in.
For the three reasons, to be more competitive, to think more complete, and to
be easy to choose jobs. I agree with that it is better to have broad
knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific
subject.
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