Re: [請益] 請問我這樣打有錯誤嗎?

看板Eng-Class作者hoch (Sanctuary)時間15年前 (2010/05/20 09:08)推噓3(3推 0噓 1→)

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: I feel I am lucky because I have a warm family. I am a lucky man because I grew up in a warm family. <必須加上解釋，為何這樣子就很幸運......> : I am active and optimistic,I also really enjoy in my work. I always feel optimistic about my work. Besides, I have strong self-motivation so I enjoy my work very much. : So after I graduated from high school,I began to looking for job and doing. I started to look for jobs immediately after obtaining my high school diploma. : In the past year,I have done some job ,such as telemarketing to sale the : Internet... I have taken many different types of positions, such as a tele-marketing sales representative and <其他你做過的......> : These job made me cultivate my patience,and I feel I am grow up in doing : these job. 其實我不太懂 patience 在這裡的意義。因為工作過，所以變很有耐心？個人覺得這裡的邏輯關係不是很清楚。 Such a diverse experience allows me to easily adapt to various types of works. : Hope I have a chance to access to company,thank you. I am very confident that my expertise and backgound would make positive contributions to your corporation. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 120.126.36.193

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