Re: [請益] 請問我這樣打有錯誤嗎?
我英文也很爛...
也是一天到晚來版上求救...
但是我有發現一點點錯誤，我先找出我知道的部分
其他的，還是請版上的大大們幫忙囉～～
希望大家英文一起進步^^
※ 引述《CapriciousX (追不上的宅)》之銘言：
: 我英文很弱。= =
: 所以我猜我大概會錯很多地方...
: 這是剛剛打的，請問我這樣打哪裡有錯誤嗎?
: 可不可以請版上的高手指點一下... Orz
: 我整個超弱...
: I feel I am lucky because I have a warm family.
^^^^^^
that
: I am active and optimistic,I also really enjoy in my work.
這句話包含兩句完整的句子會造成run-on，
兩個解決辦法：要嘛中間用句點;要嘛得加連接詞 and
第二個，我覺得應該是enjoy my work就行，不需要in my work...
: So after I graduated from high school,I began to looking for job and doing.
jobs，我覺得可以把and doing刪掉
因為你下一句就已經說明了....
: In the past year,I have done some job ,such as telemarketing to sale the
: Internet...
如果是去年，可以用last year，如果是指前幾年，可以用in the past few years
年跟工作都是可屬名詞，要記得加s或是加冠詞(a 或是the )
: These job made me cultivate my patience,and I feel I am grow up in doing
: these job.
剛上面那句一樣job都要加s，jobs
前半句有點怪怪的....但我也不會改（sorry）
後半段我會寫：and I feel that I grew more mature doing these jobs
: Hope I have a chance to access to company,thank you.
company也是需要加冠詞..我不知道改your company會不會不禮貌...
所以我會寫Hope I have a chance to have access to the company.
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