Re: [疑問] 想請大家幫個忙
※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之銘言：
: 因為我有一堂課英文聽講，老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘
: 於是我想介紹老師給大家認識
: 剛剛寫好了介紹稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤
: 希望大家能幫我指正一下
: My Favorite Singer Cheer
: Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺
: 貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
: write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
: singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
: they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
: performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
: like a picture”.
第一段是基本介紹....
有一些文法上的問題，可能還需要修很多。
然後選字例如介紹伍佰，應該用artist會比people更好
大略也是英文使用上的問題
還有句子可以再簡要一點點 就會很好了
（後面的段落也是類似英文問題）
: Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
: inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
: like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
: articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
: like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
: do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
旅行的意義翻得怪怪的 The Meaning of Travel會不會好一點= =?
你可以提一下她的歌詞意境 音樂的多樣性與獨特性
: Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
: Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
: voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
: in midnight
你可以再多提一點你自己聽陳綺貞音樂與現場的感覺（或說感動）
例如對我來講 陳綺貞第一張專輯陪我度過最苦悶的高三生活
現在我聽到這張專輯 都還常想起很多年前的那種感動
: I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
: And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
: 我真的英文很差><...
: 請大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了）
加油啦～
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