Re: [24春] 夜水母是不是有點無聊?
吃完早餐看完了,來聊聊
很多人說難道一定要有衝突有爆點有扭曲有女同才算好看嗎
水母是因為角色沒有互相扯頭髮所以才無聊嗎
不是的,真不是,這是結構上的問題
首先伏筆的鋪墊與回收可以總結成一個簡單的三段論
埋下伏筆讓人產生好奇→尋求解答的過程→收回伏筆解開疑惑
你覺得這是一個線性的過程,伏筆要先埋下再收回對吧
對,但也不全對
在優秀的作品中,這三點其實是同步進行的
在尋求解答的過程中會發現更多的伏筆
觀眾會一直處在重新提出假設,解開更多疑惑的思考中
進而鋪墊回這種會容易讓人覺得無聊的過度回才會變得有趣
水母第三集,天照這詞一出來我就知道代表著粉毛
粉毛還沒發病我就知道解藥是啥,缺少了沉澱感情的過程
水母目前缺少了一個支撐起整個架構的暗線
我猜八成是黃毛當前偶像的退團的那件事
但這又很難串起目前這四個角色的關係性
所以有很大的可能會變成黃毛的單元回
拿mygo來舉例就是祥子為什麼退團
這件事成為了整個故事最大的癥結點
它提供了討論的大方向,劇情發展的地基
而水母現在還能怎麼聊
應該就是聊黃毛下一集會不會把大家抓到床上捉i
對了原推文對mygo直球攻擊真的離譜==
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