Re: [討論] 閃軌如果主角變女的負評會變少嗎?已回收
※ 引述《NerVGear (Phantom)》之銘言:
: 很多人都不喜歡黎恩加上劇情太鳥太灌水
: 但如果黎恩變女的負評會變少嗎?
: 會讓大家原諒這一切嗎?
: 閃三黎恩鬼之力用太多變妹子會賣嗎?
劇情大概變這樣
閃1序章本來要救人,女體化以後會變成服務男性角色,
梨斗子摔後坐在別人臉上(目測是眼鏡因為反應最有趣)
2章半夜會夜闖二少房間房間談心,然後不小心就同床而睡
3章在高原被高壯又斯文的風哥溫柔的叫起床
4章為了救喜歡黏著姊姊的傲嬌小正太弟弟開外掛
變白髮紅眼的女吸血鬼外貌好像更有看點?
終章在學院祭跟壞壞男學長克洛發展出曖昧情愫
結果發現克洛騙了他
https://youtu.be/TTaeG6aNTaU?t=18m40s
「很抱歉,繼續讓灰之騎神存在下去的話很麻煩,我要把它連同學院一起破壞」
「這樣阿...那如果我贏的話呢?」
「...如果你贏的話就把50米拉連本帶利還給你吧
或者,下次成為妳的男朋友也行喔?」
「那就這樣吧,而且就道理來說男朋友可是得聽女朋友的話
回到我身邊來吧-----克洛!」
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好像真的比原版更有看點(?)
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※ 編輯: kuluma (189.52.165.134), 11/23/2016 11:27:44
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