Re: [閒聊] RE19 神回18集害慘了這部已回收
RE:0的原罪是什麼?
就是長月跟昴是一樣的人
自大貪婪地妄想要在一部作品裡同時掌控好所有想表達的元素
固執己見不願意犧牲任何自己覺得好的片段或橋段
拙劣的文綱條理、頑固地的劇情暴走、不成熟的邏輯架構
造成寫了一堆補充與外傳試圖彌補掩蓋文章的錯誤或是不完美
一部作品通常主要表現的就是兩到三個元素,比如冰菓-戀愛與推理、魯路修-機戰與智謀
果青人性與戀愛、超時空-機戰音樂與三角戀、亞人-戰鬥與智謀..等等。
並不是塞入的元素越多作品就越好,而是在於你用這些元素能打動多少讀者的心。
因為塞入的元素越多焦點越模糊、花費篇幅越大、比例的拿捏與彼此間交錯連結越複雜,
眾所周知長月的文筆與故事邏輯架構是不好的,但他卻妄想一次把戀愛、戰鬥、智謀、時
空邏輯和人性探討等等全部表現出來,這就叫找死!
但是偏偏在每個元素裡他都能有一些令人驚豔的地方,搞到最後從一部自己隨意寫的WEB小
說出了文庫最後還要動畫化...害的白狐裡外不是人,你只有25集的篇幅要怎麼去掌握這麼
多重點?怎麼去去滿足每個不同元素的喜好者?
更找死的是他喜歡把梗放很後面才揭露,故意製造不合理讓讀者看不懂,每個章節都息息
相關、環環相扣,你動了這邊很可能就前後整個變調、牽一髮而動全身,19就是最好的例
子,刪減了片段造成了劇情上的不合理,但是18話長月與製作組的共識要完整演出(因為這
邊是他整部最重視、也最想表達的部分之一),那不能砍前面只能砍後面,然後一砍就出
事了。
或者把某些橋段整個砍掉?先不論長月那邊過不過的了關,一定會有期待這個部分的觀眾
因此而感到失望或是生氣,這完全是白狐的非戰之罪、老賊的鍋不能讓白狐背阿!
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