[討論]開頭寫很好,中途就開始大爆炸的作品
如題
最近看了許多新書,
有些開頭真的寫得不錯 <大約前60章>
但後面似乎是為了配合讀者
開始大爆炸
女配看到主角通通開始發情
反派漸漸都變成一個通用模組
主角弱智光環發威 敵人智力通通 -50
很多書都覺得有點可惜...
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