[閒聊] 步步生蓮完結
嗯....收尾收得很隨便，很明顯的爛尾
幽州圍城的時候，很明顯地急轉直下，馬上就進入和談
後面的大宋情況跟回明差不多
跟蕭綽也沒再交代見面的情況，反而是以狗兒做結尾
最慘的還是正宮冬兒，不知道從什麼開始就消失了
連提都沒再提過這個皇后冬兒
看來是真的寫不下去，隨便寫完了事...
感覺月關寫穿越歷史的主題已經沒梗了，步步生蓮其實
跟回明差不多阿...回明的情節還比較好一點
不知道他下一部還要寫什麼朝代的...感覺他已經無法在
穿越歷史的小說上有什麼突破了...
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