[問題] 拒絕信的用詞

看板studyabroad作者 (狂野香蕉)時間14年前 (2012/03/28 17:36), 編輯推噓6(6推 0噓 9→)
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請問大家~ 拿到offer之後，要怎麼回信給學校說打算去念另一家? 感覺要有禮貌一點但是參考官方的rej好像又不太適合XD 謝謝~ : ) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.113.141.95
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03/28 17:42, , 1F
I am very grateful for your admission but however, I
03/28 17:42, 1F
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03/28 17:42, , 2F
have been enrolled by other school which I believe the
03/28 17:42, 2F
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03/28 17:43, , 3F
research area would fit my research interest better.
03/28 17:43, 3F
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03/28 17:43, , 4F
As a result, I wish to decline your offer. I am sorry
03/28 17:43, 4F
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03/28 17:43, , 5F
for any inconvenience that may occur. 我寫這樣
03/28 17:43, 5F
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03/28 17:53, , 6F
but however~
03/28 17:53, 6F
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03/28 18:39, , 7F
文法可能要修一下...
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03/28 19:03, , 8F
可以在這板搜尋"放棄信"
03/28 19:03, 8F
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03/28 20:56, , 9F
希望一樓是開玩笑的,那文法......
03/28 20:56, 9F
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03/29 00:07, , 10F
我沒有開玩笑耶，我真的這樣寫 :P //不然幫我刪掉好了
03/29 00:07, 10F
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03/29 00:40, , 11F
一樓的 admission 是誰給誰 好像有點混淆
03/29 00:40, 11F
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03/29 00:53, , 12F
就當我亂寫好了啦 :P 可以移駕看樓下的
03/29 00:53, 12F
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03/29 01:36, , 13F
其實我覺得沒差，看得懂就好了。一樓只是有很多贅字，
03/29 01:36, 13F
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03/29 01:37, , 14F
真要寫，兩行就可以了。
03/29 01:37, 14F
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03/29 04:36, , 15F
清楚、明確、簡單、禮貌 太多的客套都省略
03/29 04:36, 15F
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