[問題] 錄取多間後放棄信怎麼寫?

看板studyabroad作者 (futur~)時間13年前 (2011/03/15 09:46), 編輯推噓7(706)
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不好意思各位版大 想請問各位錄取一間以上必須要放棄一些學校的offer時,會不會寫信去通知學校? 如果要寫的話,通常都怎麼寫呢? 以下是我目前擬出的草稿... 希望好心人可以幫我看一下,這樣寫可不可以,會不會很無禮之類的~ 感謝... Dear admission officers, It was my great pleasure to be admitted by xxx(school's name). xxx(school's name) is a comprehensible and prime institute and always receives great reputation. However, since I was admitted by several schools this year, it became a hard decision for me to decide a definitive one. To my regret that I am not able to attend xxx(school's name), mainly because of the unaffordable tuition. I had long coveted the chance to work with your outstanding students and faculty. It is my great loss to decline your offer. Best regard, xxx(my name) 以上~ 請好心人幫我看一下了!!!謝謝!!! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.217.108

03/15 09:50, , 1F
institution, faculty is an uncountable noun!
03/15 09:50, 1F
※ 編輯: julieandme 來自: 140.112.217.108 (03/15 09:55)

03/15 09:55, , 2F
感謝s大~faculty的部分已改正!institute的部分好像都可
03/15 09:55, 2F

03/15 09:56, , 3F
可以!?
03/15 09:56, 3F

03/15 10:50, , 4F
個人建議 第一句話就表明自己沒辦法去該學校
03/15 10:50, 4F

03/15 10:51, , 5F
我之前也是和你寫差不多的內容 結果對方很可能只看了第一句
03/15 10:51, 5F

03/15 10:51, , 6F
就以為我要去 害我趕快再寄信 跟他們解釋 Orz
03/15 10:51, 6F

03/15 10:58, , 7F
不用回吧
03/15 10:58, 7F

03/15 11:22, , 8F
能愈快通知學校你不去愈好,這樣備取的人才能被通知,學校
03/15 11:22, 8F

03/15 11:22, , 9F
也能調整admission plans
03/15 11:22, 9F

03/15 11:55, , 10F
小弟才疏淺學,受教了!
03/15 11:55, 10F

03/15 12:19, , 11F
短一點比較好 太長囉~
03/15 12:19, 11F

03/15 14:00, , 12F
同意f54512 第一句話使用負面詞(sorry, unfortunately)等表明
03/15 14:00, 12F

03/15 15:20, , 13F
!!謝謝大家的建議!!!
03/15 15:20, 13F
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