[創作] 如果這是我愛你最好的距離
你的眼裡有宇宙
我卻成不了星星
我活在
你視界之外的世界
安靜的運行
成一顆獨舞的衛星
反正
火星沒有火
木星沒有木
流星沒有雨
天王星沒有天王
如果恆星也不永恆
那什麼才是長久的呢
請讓我一直這樣地
不敢靠近
不想偏離
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