[討論] 如何改進蝙蝠俠對超人?
我本人非常期待這部片,上映當天就去看了。雖然整部片合起來
我很喜歡,但單就劇情而言,簡直就是一團糟。
其中,老爺對大超之戰的結尾,大概是最為人詬病的吧…。老爺
就像個被憤怒燒壞腦子的莽漢,卻因大超叫媽媽而整個軟掉,戲
外的觀眾也一起軟掉了。所以我稍微修改了這段,希望讓它能夠
合理一點……
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戰鬥結尾,蝙拿著氪戟對著超的頭,往下用力一插……插進超頭
旁的地面
蝙:我要讓你知道,人類也能對付像你一樣的威脅…(轉頭準備離開)
超:(楞住幾秒)拜託你,救救瑪莎~
蝙:(楞住幾秒,激動)瑪莎是誰!(回來扯住超)
超:(哭腔)瑪莎是我媽媽~(拜託這句話讓超人自己講,而不是忽然跳出來的Lois)
剩下照原劇演~
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這樣演,起碼老爺不再是個莫名其妙想殺超人的腦殘了吧!而且
轉折也合理多了……
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