[創作] 逃
逃
是我腦海中唯一一個字
不知道跑了多久
但身體的疲憊 快喘不過氣的肺
顫抖抗議的雙腳
可是我不跑 就會被追上
周圍的黑暗 彷彿一塊厚絲絨布
將我緊緊的包裹住
連喘氣都聽不到聲音
只能一直跑
你問我在逃什麼?
不要問 很可怕
嘻嘻
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我覺得 我能接受他人的噓 但是是否可以告訴我 我哪裡不好
這樣我再下一次的創作才可以改進 謝謝^^
※ 編輯: angelflute 來自: 210.68.27.101 (07/19 09:36)
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