[閒聊] 讓人想棄文的點
文荒已久
好不容易在網路心得中翻出一篇長文
雖然文筆不是很愛 劇情又愛灌水 但想說至少幾百章可以撐一陣子就忍了
有一搭沒一搭看到一百多章
女主穿越尚書府(約10歲)
母親被娘家長輩氣病而死 3年守孝後父親(約30歲、從三品)要再娶
女主的大伯母身為大嫂就要幫忙找對象
找到兩個候選人
一個17歲 因為幼年訂親的未婚夫突然去世
一個20歲 祖父、雙親先後過世所以守孝
兩人都是相貌不錯而且性格家世都好
13歲的女主角跳出來說
不行!我爹才30而且還這麼帥 那個氣度十幾歲的年輕人哪裡能比
又是三品 就算是繼室嫁過來馬上就是誥命夫人耶!
17歲的那個太沒福氣了吧!我娘這麼早死我爹要配個喜慶一點的!
20歲的那個運氣也太差了!
我爹有事業又有錢又帥 挑誰挑不到!
看完只有呵呵 馬上棄文啊~
主角自我感覺良好真的忍不下去!
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覺得有些作者不太了解伴君如伴虎
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想到以前看過一篇10歲女主賣食譜賺了100兩 天菜來著
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這個我不行+1
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所以越看越文荒啊......
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之前寫過一篇反推文就是因為看到快斷氣!
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......為何要解說?當讀者都看不懂標點符號?
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沒錯!如果女主是古代的有這種詭異的想法也就算了
現代穿越的女主還有這種超過15就年紀很老的想法根本匪夷所思
而且最後女主爹娶的是15歲的少女......女主挑的 只比女主大2歲!
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對不起我笑了XDDDDDDD
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如果敘述超過500字都沒對話我也會想棄
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很多作者寫著寫著就忘記自己寫過什麼了
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