[少年] 海賊860 分鏡又進化啦!
看了本周的海賊真是不吐不快
我只吐兩頁,兩頁就好
這是原圖
http://i.imgur.com/ghvolww.jpg
這是我的錯誤視線動向
http://i.imgur.com/sTKMkdI.jpg
這是正確的視線動向
http://i.imgur.com/oKF0Gi0.jpg
我真的搞不懂,為什麼書面就兩頁,你一定要把他拆成三個部分
然後中間的部分要在左右兩頁跨來跨去的
從右頁開始看,那個舔舔人好心的發糖給小孩,我希望這是對角色的塑造(伏筆?)
如果後面用不到,這邊真的是可以不用畫
再來就是那小格到不行的過場淡出與淡入
尾田以往的做法,都是把原格旁邊再切幾格出來用
現在只切一格,又那麼小格,根本無法達成轉換場景與心情的效果
然後右頁下方,一格裡面塞了四個對話泡泡,卡彭的臉硬畫進去泡泡糊成一團,
另外兩個對話泡泡邊框也不統一下,看不出是不是同一個人在講話
到了中間部分,金什麼坷垃的名字登場,下一格領便當
左頁上方,一格塞了五個對話泡泡,
背影畫的超糊,我還以為是那個骷髏頭圖案在講話勒
這兩頁要表達的事情就是
舔舔人對小孩子很好,
再來藉由免洗角色表達新的將星冷血,有預知能力,打糖豆像在打子彈
畫了一堆東西擠在一起,就是要說這件事而已
尾田你可以休息一下,構思一下分鏡再來畫嗎? 拜託!
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