[少年] 火鳥燎原
標題就是不爽用火鳳
因為小孟已經作古了 心目中的鳳凰已經消失
上一集吧? 阿 好像是上上集了!
剩兩隻心神落魄的龍 用兩人之力抵擋袁紹的援兵
會不會太豪洨 我知道這部的劇情多少有點虎濫 但也不要虎濫到這樣
為了照著正史走 有必要鋪梗鋪到無雙無限放嗎?
阿不是很喜歡玩計中計中計中計(無限循環)
乾脆就用計謀讓袁紹退兵不是更乾脆
還可以更加放大袁方的能力阿
最最最不爽的就是 每次分鏡愛用的全黑夾頁 都要自以為有fu的搭配
看似搭的起來的對杖句或呼應句
我看到都覺得你還是去天橋底下說書就好了好不好
每次想快快往下看劇情 腦袋卻要被迫用似是而非的言語
逼迫我多想一下作者到底想表達什麼
這樣還就算了
重點是我看了以後還是很沒fu阿
這種計倆用多了已經不是風格 而是看久會想吐
打斷讀者沉浸在劇情的畫面中
就好像我興致高昂的想看電影 按下play 卻換來全黑的畫面
有些事件就算彼此會影響好了 也不要硬是串接在一起
再強調下去就變成人人有天運 而不是能力了
這部漫畫從讓我驚嘆 畫出我心目中真正的三國英雄
從人性多了點 黑暗多了點 到現在變成
廢話多了點 無雙多了點
桑心啊...
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