[亂吐] 聖石小子
好吧 老實說我覺得極克那段真的鋪梗鋪的很棒
但是還是要吐一下
這部漫畫最大的缺點應該就是 打太多了
一開始出現六星DB 後來又出現XX集團
XX集團打完以後又出現YY集團 YY集團之後又有ZZ集團
(對不起 XX YY ZZ我都沒有很認真看 所以才只敢在亂吐當天上來吐XD)
最後還莫名奇妙冒出一個魔界四天王 每個人不外乎見面就是打打打打
雖然沒有像其他漫畫的打鬥太過制事化(ex死神) 可是真的打久了也會煩啊
而且主角群聖母技能開太大了吧
長太醜的有些就直接丟掉不收服了 長的帥的最後都會變成朋友兩肋插刀是怎樣ˊˋ
扣除掉打鬥的劇情 這部漫畫應該可以畫的精簡一點....
如果真的能夠做到也能算是一部相當不錯的作品了
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