[轉錄][青年] 浪人劍客,少了一點點熱血的劍客漫畫
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作者: ROSACANINA (靜) 看板: Suckcomic
標題: [青年] 浪人劍客,少了一點點熱血的劍客漫畫
時間: Fri Sep 19 02:14:10 2008
浪人劍客是一部優秀的漫畫
它是出自曾經創造經典中的經典,灌籃高手的井上雄彥筆下
不論是如禪學的劍客思想
或著是豁出生命的對決
每一橋段都相當吸引人
美中不足的就是
我認為它的打鬥缺少了一點點的熱血
剖析原因
我想主要是在於裡頭的劍客決鬥時
出招時都沒有把招式名稱大聲喊出來的原因所致
這部漫畫演了二十來集
裡頭的男主角宮本武藏
卻沒有創出任何一招有招名的招式
反觀城市風雲兒,神劍闖江湖
同樣都是劍客漫畫
裡頭就有做到這一點
這是它們強過浪人劍客的所在
像是武藏在砍殺對手時
如果旁邊加個有魄力的對話框喊著招名
例如『烈空斬』或是『破山擊』之類
然後伴隨著對手全身噴血被飛彈出去
大家不覺得更能增加熱血度嗎?
大家都知道武藏著名的五輪書
如果把這點創意融入絕招當中
譬如武藏對吉岡清十郎時
居弱勢被清十郎的劍招彈的老遠時
跪在地上喘著氣
然後從口袋中拿出一個鐵環戴在自己手上
嘴上念著『進入二輪』
接著一瞬間在清十郎面前消失
出現在清十郎背後用力砍出去
清十郎擋住卻檔到刀裂開還被彈出去吐血
然後在心中大感詫異
『什麼!!他的力量和剛剛簡直判若兩人!!』
這樣的橋段更是熱血到不行
或著是敵對角色小次郎
砍殺敵人的時候只用一個畫面帶過小次郎收刀
然後背景塗黑
只用白墨用豪放的草書寫著燕返兩個大字
敵人就噴血四分五裂而亡
一定更能讓讀者覺得熱血沸騰
一邊抖著手一邊說好強啊
這樣子武藏怎麼打得過他呢的刺激感
如果加入喊招要素
就像加了泡菜的臭豆腐,加了貓耳的林志零,加了20%的百分百戶愚呂
浪人劍客一定會成為更棒的經典中的經典!
只可惜...
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