[履歷] 新鮮人 cover letter 求批已刪文

看板Salary作者 (eddyliu)時間6年前 (2019/03/12 16:36), 6年前編輯推噓8(809)
留言17則, 6人參與, 6年前最新討論串1/1
以下格式僅供參考,可依個人需求喜好填寫。 小提醒:此為公開看板,建議可將個資予以馬賽克。 -----------------------------以上說明可按ctrl+y刪除--------------------------- - 個人學經歷背景:國立大學工程系學碩 欲應徵之職務:製成相關工程師 自傳履歷內容: Dear Recruiter, My name is xxx. I am excited to be applying for the xxx Engineer position at x xx. I received both my bachelor and master degree in xxx from Xxx University. I’m a communicative and enthusiastic person. I was the leader of the artistic design department in graduated student association, and cooperated with four members from design department. We were responsible for designing the poster, activity handbook, backdrop, and booklet for 2015 campus recruitment fair. Although I had never participated any design work, I was willing to face this challenge. I acted as the bridge between our team and employment service divis ion of school. I negotiated with co-workers to ensure the department run smoot hly and kept track of their process. During the internship at xxx company, I learned how to solve problems by teamw ork. My job content was to compare our own product with commercially available product through chemical and physical analyses. There was a strong correlatio n between the material process and the testing results. Hence, I had to closel y cooperate with the process engineer to optimize the final products. I was taught to be creative in graduate school. My advisor gave me a general o rientation, and I designed and executed the whole research plans. During the p eriod, I won the silver prize in the xxx poster competition with research resu lts, and also participated in xxx scholarship activity. I am aware that xxx has been engaged in memory area for a long time, and recen tly released a new cost-efficient 1300 SSD. Based on my personal characteristi cs, I am confident to face the rapidly changing market of memory. Thank you for taking the time to read my application and for your consideratio n. I would love to come in for an interview and am looking forward to hearing from you. Please contact me at your earliest convenience via email or by phone . Sincerely, xxx -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 39.10.0.74 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1552379808.A.2ED.html ※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 16:39:56 ※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 16:40:41 ※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 16:43:01

03/12 16:49, 6年前 , 1F
跟我之前用的template好像XDDDD
03/12 16:49, 1F
我沒用模板欸哈哈我自己寫的~

03/12 16:50, 6年前 , 2F
真要說的話 I 開頭的句子偏多
03/12 16:50, 2F
想請問不用i開頭要怎麼寫比較合適

03/12 16:53, 6年前 , 3F
太長,建議google一下cover letter怎麼寫
03/12 16:53, 3F
我這應該比較像英文自傳

03/12 16:55, 6年前 , 4F
我個人的經驗是盡量精鍊一點 供你參考
03/12 16:55, 4F
了解

03/12 17:02, 6年前 , 5F
精簡一點是好的,我當初也差不多這個長度,投遞轉換率不低
03/12 17:02, 5F
什麼是投遞轉換率 ※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 17:04:33 ※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 17:05:13

03/12 17:05, 6年前 , 6F
建議給外國人改
03/12 17:05, 6F
※ 編輯: eddyliu1 (39.10.0.74), 03/12/2019 17:06:05

03/12 17:06, 6年前 , 7F
我覺得有些地方怪怪的 雖然我都看得懂...
03/12 17:06, 7F

03/12 17:29, 6年前 , 8F
精簡一點 直接說 : 你好, 我爸是...
03/12 17:29, 8F

03/12 17:33, 6年前 , 9F
就是 面試機會/投遞數
03/12 17:33, 9F

03/12 17:33, 6年前 , 10F
I was taught to be creative 這段太流水帳了
03/12 17:33, 10F

03/12 17:33, 6年前 , 11F
建議你花點小錢請專業的幫忙修改
03/12 17:33, 11F

03/12 17:34, 6年前 , 12F
外國人語感好,但cover letter不一定寫得好
03/12 17:34, 12F

03/12 17:34, 6年前 , 13F
CV應該著重在你有什麼經歷,能力讓對方覺得你適合並可以
03/12 17:34, 13F

03/12 17:34, 6年前 , 14F
勝任改職位
03/12 17:34, 14F

03/12 17:37, 6年前 , 15F
第二段雖然強調你的溝通能力 但著墨太多在非相關經驗...
03/12 17:37, 15F

03/12 17:39, 6年前 , 16F
跳脫流水帳的思維寫 可以改善以 I 開頭的句子結構
03/12 17:39, 16F

03/12 18:18, 6年前 , 17F
國內製程要用英文寫?
03/12 18:18, 17F
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