新鮮人英文自傳求批...
背景：私立大學企管 多益僅790
該篇自傳想附在人力銀行的英文自傳內
或是該改為pdf檔放在附件呢
希望能找到外商的缺，或是國內公司的國外業務...但同時也不反對一些貿易類其他職位
，
因此傾向大方向的介紹自己沒有針對明確產業別，不知道是否正確，文章就靠僅有的英文
能力還有字典拼湊出來，還想麻煩板上前輩不吝指正了十分感謝
My name is xxx and I am a business graduate from YYY University, Department of
Business Management. In my college, I specially interest in aspect of Marketi
ng and Human Resource. I believe that my academic background and social skill
make me as a strong entry level candidate for the job.
Family & Personality
I have a lovely family. My father is an owner of mobile store. Whenever I am f
ree, I really like to interact with customers, and learn how to react with dif
ferent client even foreigner. Every time customer leave, I would review the ca
se to understand how can I do much better in next time. That create so many op
portunities for me to verify and to modify my concept and attitude on work. I
think I am not only an outgoing person but positive and considerate.
Leadership Experience & Interest
I am a really enthusiast about sports. I play basketball, baseball and softbal
l, also join dancing club in my high school and college. In my club, I usually
play a leader or planner part. From recruiting new members, planning a show o
f the year and holding the 3 days training camp. I should totally understand t
he detail of case and make sure it would be hold successful.
Work Experience
I do a part-time job in my first year of college at Pakistan restaurant.
In there. I learn how to get along with colleague from different country such
as India, Vietnam and Pakistan. In my third year, I find a HR intern vacancy a
t one listed company. The company called ‘’Dimerco’’ in Logistic industry.
The job description is “Assisting manager to formulate report with word or e
xcel” and “Making the data turn into the information”. That makes me improv
e my ability of thinking comprehensively.
Last year, I go to TGI Friday’s restaurant to learn their FSS (Friday's servi
ce style).
Both in theory and practice. I get award of top 10 of a year, top sales and be
st rookies from TGI Friday’s, and also get the qualification of bartender.
In there, I learn how to serve 5 or 6 tables efficiently in the same time. So
I am good at prioritize, and I can always make right decision immediately.
In summary
I can always face challenges in positive attitude, and I like to find somewhe
re I don’t read or study before. To be a fresh graduate, I have infinite pass
ion and energy. I hope I can get in the best company and create my own value i
n there.
I would appreciate an opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earlies
t convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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謝謝前輩指導，我會試著改成條列式，所以人力銀行英文自傳那邊是放cv附件再押上完整
的resume比較好嗎...
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我有想過寫出實例但是敘述一件事情的背景.過程.結果，會不會讓文章太冗贅......對於這
方面是真的有點疑惑，我會試著用條列順序修改的，謝謝前輩願意指導！
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謝謝指正...我文法真的爛到家 嗚嗚
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我會努力讓他看起來好一點的...
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了解了！文法方面我會找厲害一點的朋友幫忙看，但身邊還真的沒有native speaker可以
幫忙...
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這篇其實是從我英文自介的底稿修來的...敢講不會寫的最佳寫照 結構我會再濃縮抓重點
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拼裝車...
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790真的不高啊.........
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我以為敘述事實 所以通篇都用現在式 慘
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菜就是該被電！
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我想呈現的是家庭環境帶出人格特質，還是直接直述就好了 真的菜到不行
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我會試著拜託朋友的！
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啊...第一段是參考其他人範例的寫法
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只會單字的790...
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我會找多一點範例來看的，謝謝前輩！
※ 編輯: ssabc2211 (39.8.0.98), 02/12/2017 15:57:25
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