[請益] 新鮮人自傳求批
各位板友大家好
小弟78年次退伍一陣子正在找工作
尋求的工作大多是百貨零售或是餐飲的儲幹
另外還有各種業務性質的工作
想請問各位板友小弟的自傳應該怎麼修改會更好
英文自傳的部分我覺得有個問題就是翻得太口語化
會用的辭彙也不多
想請問該如何加強
希望可以請板上優秀的大家幫我看看
謝謝
中文自傳:
謝謝各位主管撥冗參閱我的履歷，我的名字叫做XXX，畢業於國立中央大學經濟學系，
從小在台中長大，父親是一位計程車司機，母親則經營一家小企業，從小父母給我的教育
就是做人一定要腳踏實地，認真負責，我也一直以這樣的態度生活著。
我的興趣是棒壘球，大學時參加系上壘球隊，連續三年獲得全國經濟系冠軍，我喜歡
旅遊，到處走走增廣見聞可以讓我保持心情愉快之外也能增加自己的閱歷，我非常喜歡挑
戰自己的極限，甚至挑戰別人認為不可能做到的事，我曾經挑戰一個人吃完四份麥當勞套
餐，挑戰一個人騎著機車從台中騎到台北，在我退伍時，我以三十五天的時間，徒步走路
繞了台灣一圈，這些對我都是非常寶貴的回憶，我相信這些經驗除了鍛鍊我不屈不撓的精
神外，也會對我將來在工作上的表現有很大的幫助。
我有三年百貨銷售的工讀經驗，在大二到大四的三年間擔任名牌太陽眼鏡的假日銷售
工讀生，這些經驗讓我非常了解服務業的生態，也很能適應服務業的工作環境與要求，我
會用認真的態度與更多的努力達成任何工作上的挑戰。
我開朗積極，喜歡與人相處，不會畏懼任何挑戰，不介意常常出差，也很能適應各種
應酬，我喜歡學習如何讓自己的能力提升，我喜歡透過工作獲得成就感，因此，請盡量給
我任何難題，我會盡力將它做到完美，並且讓團隊更加進步，謝謝！
英文自傳:
Thank you for taking your time to read my resume. My name is
XXX. I graduated from National Central University, major in
economics. I’m from Taichung. My father is a cab driver and my
mother is a owner of a little company. They taught me that you
must always be honest and serious in work and I did.
I like baseball and softball. I was a member of a softball
team which represent Economics department of National Central
University and won championship three years in a row in National
Economics Softball contest. I like traveling a lot. It makes me
always in a good mood and keeps my eyes open. I like
breakthrough limit of myself even challenging something that other
people think it can’t be done. I can eat four McDonald's meals
in one time. I can ride a motorcycle from Taichung to Taipei.
After my military time, I walked a circle of Taiwan with only my
feet in 35 days. Those are very valuable memories to me and I
believed those experiences makes me stronger and gives me a better
working performance.
I have department store selling experience for three years. I
had a part-time job of sunglasses selling during my sophomore year
to senior year. Because of these experiences, I know how to do a
wonderful job in selling business and I would do my best.
I’m a outgoing person who loved hanging out with people. I
will not be afraid of any challenges. Just give me missions and
I will do my best to finish it. Just hire me and I’m your
best bet. Thank you!
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