Re: [寫作班] 托福第42週 (vinneko)
※ 引述《Vinneko (OD)》之銘言：
: 1. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do
: you think this person would like and dislike about living in your
: town or city? Why?
: The first thing the person who move in Taipei would like is
: that he would find it is very convenience living here. The convenience
: stores are so many that one can always find them in 500 meters around
: wherever we are. Besides, the tranportation systems are convenience, too.
: There are handreds of kinds of bus in Taipei, we can go almost everywhere
hundreds
這邊好多of阿 請問大大如果要保留原意，要怎麼改比較好呢？
可以寫成 hundred kinds of bus 嗎？
: by taking the bus. Moreover, by taking the Mass Rapid Transportation(MRT)
by taking bus (?可嗎 只是覺得the 在這邊有點多)
: system, one can go to their destinations faster.
台北捷運網站上寫的是 "mass rapid transit system"
不過我也覺得可以用transportation
: However, the living environment is very crowded in Taipei city, and
: one have to suffer the corwdness in the public transportations during rush
: rush hours. Another thing is that the pace of daily life in the city is rush.
好多rush 既然前面已經用rush 後面我想是不是改用 quick or very fast 之類的呢？
: Therefore, one might notice that the traffic is dangerous in the city
: because people are always rushing for something without taking care of others.
: Another advantage of living in Taipei city is that most of the people
: are friendly here. Wherever one get lost or have problems, people around
: are always willing to help even though he is a stranger for them.
: However, one might find that the quality of serveice in most of the
: stores are not good enough compare to those in western society. For example,
是不是要用comparing 比較好？
可以避免一個句子兩個動詞，而無連接詞。
: a taxi driver helping the clients to load their packages into the car is
: common in western world, which is not that common in Taipei.
: To sum, there are plenty of advantages to live in the Taipei city.
: However, there are still some disadvantges unacceptable for some people.
: Nevertheless, I think Taipei is a good city which is always open for those
: want to move in .
英文作文每段開頭是不是不用空很多格呢？
如果真的要空，空幾格比較適合呢？
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