Re: [寫作班] 托福第12週 mason, 1
※ 引述《mason (牲牲不息)》之銘言：
: : 1. A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to
: : protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose?
: : Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
: If I'm the chairman of a well financial affair company, I'll like to do
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假設語氣 If I were..., I would...
"a well financial affair company" 是指財務狀況良好的公司嗎?
可以說 "a financially well company"
(adv.) (adj.) (n.)
: something green to our living environment. Because I think the arts
xxxxxxx
: is base on clean and healthy background, which the improvement of
based ^a and improving the environment
: environment can support it, too.
:
: By the way, I'm the one who can't understand well in arts, although I
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: can't imagine the amount of population who will appreciate about arts,
people would xxxxx^the
: but I think nobody will refuse to stay in a comfortable environment.
would
: So, I thought that is a way to complete in both respect if a company is
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: going to invest a good environment. For example, in the busy traffic
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這句感覺不太通順，請問是說，投資在改善環境上可以一舉兩得嗎?
: system of taipei, the driver will not feel like watching some art
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許多駕駛並不會不願意見到路上美術裝飾吧，但也許他們比較希望看到樹。
Suggestion: "The driver would rather see a woody cover of trees instead of
art and sculptures."
: sculpture but a woody cover of tree. Don't you agree?
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: The question never said that I'm a chairman, but I'm really don't know
: how to get a start sentence. Is it diverge from the topic?
I think it's fine. The most plain and standard way would be to simply start
with:
"I think the company should choose to protect the environment."
: My english is quite poor and this is my first article in ST_english,
: I hope that teacher will give me a lot of advice, thank you very much^^.
It's a nice article! It seems like you write with confidence and don't try
to get too much ahead of yourself. Good job!
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