[寫作班] 版友 kfsfat .托福第一周 第一題
太久沒寫了，真是太慚愧了。po上這篇文章給大家討論討論。
感謝囉。
Nowadays, university has no longer been a fresh word since students took
university (degree) as their basic (fundamental) diploma. According to my
personal experience, I strongly believe people should attend collage.
Becaus college is a place that students can learn more new knowledge and social
experience.
ps:1.上面第一個括號是想問說省略比較好還是寫出來比較好?
2.第二個括號是想問說用basic 還是用fundamental比較好?
First, university is definitely a best learning environment as well as a
place which is full of professional courses one prefers. There are a variety of
subjects you can choice such as mechanical engineering, chemical engineering
and so on. There are also many professors with abundant teaching experience
which can help students to solve the problems in their studies.
With teachers' help, students can learn lots of useful basic and professional
skills which are very helpful to their future career.
Second, university is also a spot for everyone to interact with people of
different backgrounds. For example, some of students perhaps determine to
attend school clubs. Here, you can get in touch with many friends, and also
learn how to accomplish an activity with suggestions and help of others.
During this period of time, it is a good chance for students to realize how to
cooperate with one another.
All in all, students not only can be well-educated here, but also can learn
how important the social experience is. Last but not least, everyone has his or
her own purpose of attending university; however, here is absolutely a perfect
place for students to fulfill their will.
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