Re: [寫作班] Computer- Carol
※ 引述《carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢 )》之銘言：
: I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big
[I've been work as a secretary more forty years. As a big company in the field,
the company work is always busy.]
: and busy one. In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake,
[In the beginning I was very busy and had little time for rest
due to daily heavy loaded work.]
: because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid
"quite" a big company \ try using different
"quite" busy / words as possible!
: development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to
[Everything became a lot easier as science's rapid development and I neither
have to call clients nor remember everything by heart with helpful tool like
computer.]
: the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's
: schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less
[Not only I work in more efficient way with less mistakes
but also avoid unnecessary overtime working.]
: mistakes. I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention
[Therefore computer is my most favorite as the greatest invention
on earth.]
: within a day.
: .
: 這是我第一週的作文 請各位不吝惜地給予指教 謝謝
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