[問題] 英文作文
想請各位大大幫我改一下英文作文...感激不盡
另外想小小聲的問..這篇中高級可以過嘛..
現在越來越多人喜歡使用網路的即時訊息,他們偏好在網路上打字勝於打電話。
1. 請給一些造成這種情況的原因。
2. 這樣的溝通方式會產生什麼樣的潛在問題?
Nowadays, with the advance of technology, sending instant message on the net
is getting more and more popular . People prefer sending message in typing
way rather than giving phone call. That is because most of electronic
products have the function of surfing the net such as computers and
smartphones, which of them used by people everywhere. People not only can
send and get the instant message in one second, but don’t have to pay the
high expense of phone fee. Therefore, this kind of communication way becomes
a trend in life of people.
On the other hand, this new communication way has two potential problems.
Firstly, students may like to spend most of their time chatting with their
friends on the net, and neglect their school works. Secondly, if people
always interactive with people in this way, they will have bad human
relationships. Therefore, even if the new communication way is changing people
’s life, we still have to communicate with people in real way such as
companying with family and our friends, and should not be controlled by
electronic products.
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