[討論] AWA no.6 from chao
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Argu no.6
The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to
regional life.
"Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business
opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios's
unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial
center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of
the region's manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand
its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and
development of innovative technologies."
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
flaws:
1.The effect of low unemployment rate may let Corporations hard to find
employees. Than Helios may not be a good location which Corporations find.
2.The data of unemployment rate may be unfair.
3.The industrial center may not be suit for each type of Corporations.
4.The environment of industrial center may has been bad because of pollution.
5.Attracting other types of companies may weaken its industrial base.
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issue no.6
"There is only one definition of success - to be able to spend your life in
your own way."
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this definition of success?
Support your position by using reasons and examples from your reading, your
own experience, or your observation of others.
disagree:
1.There are many definitions of success.
ex: some like money, but others like fame.
2.Living in their own way but no goals is not successful.
ex: nomad is free, but others view him as loser.
2.Someone must spend their life on hard tasks, but they are successful in
their profession.
ex: the president is very busy, but undoubtly he is successful in politics
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