Re: [討論] 628魯夫(雷)
這話有點小失望
第一感覺內容少了點 大格子用得頗多
第二 抓住了人還要三小時後才殺 還要用水慢慢淹死
有點常見的爛梗
為什麼還要等三小時用水慢慢淹死?
要嘛就直接殺掉 要嘛就因為某種理由不殺 要殺還要慢慢淹死留給主角來救
而且也看不出壞人有覺得慢慢折磨好人很爽的原因 是放在一個沒人的房間慢慢淹
總覺得這樣的劇本老套了點
希望是有什麼伏筆
還有這次的魔王太沒殺傷力了 完全想叫魯夫趕快去幹爆他
甚平還跟魯夫在那扭扭捏捏有點受不了
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我知道老梗是無法避免的 直接殺掉也不用玩了
不過通常一個好的編劇都會儘量避開 或是想辨法修飾這些老梗
舉個例 MR3打魯海那集也是 想慢慢殺死魯海
但是是放在蠟蛋糕下想慢慢做成蠟人 就可以感受壞人拖時間想獲得的折磨好人的爽感
在沙鱷那邊也有一個類似橋段 但場景就設計得比較豐富
通常要慢慢殺死都會把場景設計得很有意思
不然也可以不殺死 單純關起來也沒什麼不合理
也有的是想當下就殺死 但可能是派出什麼處刑者之類的讓好人有機會翻盤
也可以是發展出雙線的劇情 像一邊是要救一邊要逃走
霍迪說 三個小時要處刑 但三小時顯得很長又沒什麼理由 慢慢淹死也很普通
直覺上霍迪如果真的想殺死尼普頓跟索隆他們 都會說一小時 或半小時 就是不會準備太久
如果是想交換什麼條件或設下引誘的陷阱 在這話也感覺不出他有這樣的意思
最近幾話我都覺得不錯看啊 只有這話的橋段這樣設計感覺上弱了點
※ 編輯: SKS 來自: 140.112.29.129 (06/17 13:24)
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