[心得] 關於故事節奏...(小雷)
(內容有點雷)
近來突然覺得自已追便當有點不像以前一樣勤快
一開始以為是自已工作忙碌的問題
後來才覺得可能是故事的情節跳的太快
先前覺得滿重要的歷史劇情全都以神速的方式帶過
所以短短的四週連載內就草草的交待了二位人物領便當的過程....
我覺得我都還沒有進入到劇情,連蘊釀感動的情緒都來不及..
對方就領便當下台一鞠躬了...冏
漸漸的變的對新劇情不太期待了...(本來剛進人魚島時很期待人魚島的劇情)
尤其是最近一期的連載乙姬領便當的地方讓我覺得處理的非常草率..
雖然中間穿插了王子強顏歡笑的想要逗笑白星公主...
但變的有點刻意,有點失去以往OP讓我覺得打從心底感動的感覺
不曉得是不是有人和我一樣?
(或是先前有針對這點討論了,但我爬文時沒有看到)
雖然感覺是為了快速交待過去好讓主角群的故事能順利進行
但自從尾大休息一個月回來後的劇情都快到讓我有點無所適從
既希望不要拖戲,又希望要好好交待劇情..
身為讀者還是很難滿足啊....
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