[討論] 兩個場景的同時對話如何處理?
痾...不知道是不是該發在這裡的,因為雖然叫輕小說板
但是點進來一看全部是推薦、買賣或是贈與
不知道這裡適不適合討論寫作手法
總之說了那麼多廢話,問題如下:
A和B在甲地,C和D在乙地
今天同一時間剛好這四人都碰到或是在聊同一個事件
這時如果是看動畫的話就可以用不停切換場面的方法解釋
但是小說的話,你要一直寫說現在是甲地喔!現在是乙地喔!
一直這樣提醒讀者難免被嫌囉嗦,自己寫起來也覺得拖沓
想請教有沒有關於這種事情的好寫法
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