Re: [句子] 關於金錢的句子寫作
我試試
※ 引述《chunnone ()》之銘言：
: Moreover, it(money) even corresponds to the codeword of many attracting and
: beautiful things that men pursue.
: 甚至，錢等同於許多人們所追求的誘人的美麗的事物的代名詞。
: Q1: "codeword" 這個字這樣使用好嗎? 還是有更好的說法?
: Q2: correspond to 如此使用對嗎?
我可能會說
Moreover, it has become a name that stands for numerous attractive things
that people pursue.
: The influence of money is far from/ beyond our imaginations.
: 金錢的影響力遠超過人們的想像。
: Q3: far from 跟 beyond 哪個好呢? 還是都可以??
我會說
The power of money is far beyond our imagination.
: The problem is: you cannot almost do anything without the support of it.
: 問題是: 沒有它(錢)的支持你幾乎無法做任何事。
: Q4: 這句話這樣寫OK嗎? 因為用了很多否定字，是否會造成語意不清呢?
The problem is: you can hardly do anything without it.
: Q5:以下兩句，何者更適用於正式寫作?
: PS: 我個人是覺得第一句有些囉嗦，第二句則不確定文法是不是完全正確
: They contribute to highlight the parts that cannont gain by the force of money.
: or 寫成 They contribute to highlight the parts that beyond money's reach.
第一句的文法不對，第二句OK
: 緊接著下一句
: ... by the force of money；for example, the sincere relationships among
: people, an individual life,(and)especially for the flying time.
: Q6: for example 的使用 有錯嗎? 還有especially 的使用對嗎? and 要加嗎?
: 這是我容易錯的地方，所以不太有信心自己是不是用對
: 以上，拜託大家幫我看看<(_ _)>
: 有先查過用法了 不過造句後的結果 不確定是否也正確
: 請大家提點 指引
我的改法：
...money's reach, such as the genuine relationships among people, the (why
individual? it can be "spiritual" or something) life, and of course, the time.
(or the elusive time / the flying time will do, too)
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