Re: [文法] 幫我修改文法...
※ 引述《metea (metea)》之銘言：
: Leon is waked up by his father on seven-thirty in the morning. They have a
: plan on this holiday--have a picnic in the park today. First, they arrive the
: park, Leon's mother brings a lot of food, drinks for them. They sit on grass
: and enjoy these delicious food. In the afternoon , Leon and his father play
: frisbee, his sister fly a kite. They will been happy a day.
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: 謝謝!
Leon was woken up by his father on seven-thirty in the morning. They
had a plan today─(to have) a picnic in park / They had a plan to have a
picnic in park today. Leon's mother brought with her a lot of food and
drinks when they arrived the park. They sat on the grass and enjoyed the
delicious food. In the afternoon, Leon and his father played frisbee
together, his sister flying a kite. It was a very happy day for them/
It has been a very wonderful day for them/They were very happy today.
有錯請指正, thanks! :)
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然後有一天我ꄠ 靠在窗
前，會發現原來我是株 ╭╮──╪──╭╮
不 ＊ fleuve ＊
需要陽光的植物︴1mK︴30m直到有一天我閉上眼睛 ╰╯──╪──╰╯
看不見自己、卻可以看見你…ꄠ ♂
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※ 編輯: fleuve 來自: 125.225.70.101 (09/08 16:01)
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