Re: [問題] Cambridge7 Test3 的圖表??

看板IELTS作者 (八卦板塑化劑大師)時間11年前 (2012/12/29 18:40), 編輯推噓5(5017)
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有寫錯敬請指正,謝謝! Compared with the average price of housing in 1989, Tokyo had a decrease of 7% from 1990 to 1995. However, the average price of housing had a increase of 2% from 1996 to 2002. Therefore, the average price of housing only had a decrease of 5%. ※ 引述《narwhale (去死去死特攻隊長)》之銘言: : 裡面關於東京的數據我不確定該怎麼表達 : 圖中的資訊大致是這樣: : 和1989年的平均房價相比, : 東京的1990-1995的平均房價下降7%, : 但1996-2002的平均房價上升2%到只剩5%的下降。 : 由於是decrease升到最後仍然是decrease : 我寫出來的句子自己看怎麼看都很彆扭,如下: : Compared with the aerage house prices in 1989, : Tokyeo had a dicrease of 7% in the mean between 1990 and 1995, : followed by a increase of 2 % to the decrease of 5% in the mean between : 1996 and 2002. : 大家有沒有啥好點子啊,我腦袋打結了 : 另外,我能說-7% increase或者a increase of -7%嗎? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.118.33.39

12/29 19:00, , 1F
感謝啊,分開來寫安全多了
12/29 19:00, 1F

12/29 19:21, , 2F
我想一想後覺得第二句可能會誤解為1996-2002是+2%
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12/29 19:22, , 3F
However, the average price of housing had a increase
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12/29 19:24, , 4F
from the former stage(1996-1995) to the latter stage
12/29 19:24, 4F

12/29 19:25, , 5F
(1996-2002).
12/29 19:25, 5F

12/29 19:26, , 6F
囧,我的of 2%被吃掉了
12/29 19:26, 6F

12/29 22:38, , 7F
抱歉我沒有圖表,是按你的敘述翻譯的,但是你的寫法...
12/29 22:38, 7F

12/29 22:39, , 8F
from the former stage to the latter stage
12/29 22:39, 8F

12/29 22:39, , 9F
圖表的表達真的這樣嗎?
12/29 22:39, 9F

12/30 00:37, , 10F
圖表中沒有用到stage的說法,但是1996-1995是一條向下的
12/30 00:37, 10F

12/30 00:39, , 11F
bar,水平線是1989年的平均房價,可以看出減少了7%
12/30 00:39, 11F

12/30 00:40, , 12F
然後1996-2002是另一條水平線下的bar,降低5%
12/30 00:40, 12F

12/30 00:41, , 13F
上三句的是1990-1995,筆誤。
12/30 00:41, 13F

12/30 00:42, , 14F
總之1990-1995,以及1996-2002兩段時期的平均房價都是和
12/30 00:42, 14F

12/30 00:43, , 15F
1989年比較。
12/30 00:43, 15F

12/30 00:45, , 16F
所以我原先很困惑要怎麼表達這上升的2%
12/30 00:45, 16F

12/30 00:53, , 17F
後來想想這由-7%到-5%增加的2%,應該要強調是兩個bar(兩
12/30 00:53, 17F

12/30 00:54, , 18F
段時間的平均值的差距)不然會誤以為是和1989年比較
12/30 00:54, 18F

12/30 00:55, , 19F
抱歉一開始沒表達清楚
12/30 00:55, 19F

12/30 20:46, , 20F
OK!
12/30 20:46, 20F

01/05 16:19, , 21F
increase的不定冠詞要用an
01/05 16:19, 21F

01/06 00:59, , 22F
感謝樓上的指正 要放的是an 非a 感謝 :)
01/06 00:59, 22F
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