Re: [心得] 我的雅思人蔘(六戰overall 7)

看板IELTS作者FYM時間12年前 (2012/04/29 16:42)推噓14(14推 0噓 0→)

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感謝大家的支持(._.) 沒想到一個考了五次才站上7分的心得文也能擁有這麼多迴響囧還有雪片般飛來的信件(大家也太熱情了吧) 雖然之前說在下快被工作跟居妹特壓死(真的是事實沒錯) 但我深刻能明白那種還在雅思苦海中載浮載沉掙扎的煎熬心情!!! (自認為還算滿堅強的在下在工作上無論壓力再大天天被客戶罵被老闆釘為了生活壓力考試工作兩頭燒都沒想哭過在拿到第四次ielts成績時竟然不爭氣地落下幾滴淚來囧!!!.....) 所以剛處理完一堆雜事還是來分享一下其他心得好了(如果大家不嫌棄的話orz) 希望能對大家有一丁點點點的小幫助@@ --------------------------以上落落長前言分隔線------------------------------- 除了speaking之外我想我接下來第二穩定的就是writing吧(?) 我的writing從頭到尾實際練習的篇數大概只有10篇不到吧(包括大小作文) 但分數大多在6.5 或到7左右(整個投資報酬率很高 l_l) 不過我每一篇寫完後都很透徹得分析自己的架構和邏輯整理出一套自己最好的模版自此之後我其實每次考試前都只有看自己的整理筆記對於Ielts的作文(尤其是Task2)我覺得是七分架構，二分想法和句型，一分單字也就是比起寫出一堆艱深單字和堆湊起來但敘述想法時的邏輯跳來跳去、毫無結構的文章還不如用歪果仁最熟悉讓他們讀起來最沒負擔一下就能知道你想表達的重點是什麼的作文架構切入然後幾個好的單字跟小小句型變化只是最後蛋糕上的點綴而已在考試來說我通常都只寫四段四段的結構分別如下: Introduction 正面論點(先帶出另一種普遍的事實或某一群人的看法，我通常寫自己支持方向的反向) 反面論點(自己真正支持的方向) 結論架構範例: (前言...) some people believe that...while many others hold opposit view, First of all, there is no doubt that (寫某些人的看法) However, on the other hand, (帶出自己真正的中心思想) In Conclusion, 實際範例(附上我自己練習時的拙作): Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the past few decades, the refinement in technology and science has evidently altered our lives, especially ones related to transportation. Nevertheless, whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate among the public since some people believe that raising the price of petrol is the best way to ease traffic and pollution problems while many others hold opposite view. First of all, (點出本段topic sentence) it is reasonable and understandable that increasing the price of patrol will directly decrease people's willingness of driving (延伸說明) since it will raise their burden financially while they drive their private vehicles to transport. (實際舉例) For example, many white-color workers need to commute between two different cities during the weekdays by driving their own cars and it may probably shorten their wages in form of raising their financial loadings in driving cost. As a result, people will try their best to find out an alternative way to commute in that situation. However, it is not the best solution to tackle with the problems in traffic and pollution since it simply cures the symptoms, not the disease. (提出本段topic sentence-我通常寫自己真正的立場) The best solution in my opinion is to construct fundamental infrastructure, (延伸說明) more specifically, to build up a more comprehensive transportation system for the public. (實際舉例) For instance, a comprehensive underground network, a high speed railway system, and a well-organized buses routes, including various vans and shuttle buses, will be a significant attraction to the public passengers since taking the convenient public transportation will definetely save both time and money in looking for parking spaces, maintaining the vehicle parts, and purchasing the high price petrol as well. By way of conclusion, although it is indeed an effective way to managing the traffic and pollution problems by raising the petrol price and restraining the private cars usage, it is simply a temporary solution in the current stage Constructing a more comprehensive public transportation system will be a better solution in the long term. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 大概是這個樣子其實我寫作文時很少用到什麼高深的單字但一定要做到結構清晰讓讀的人一下就能抓到你的行文結構和中心思想盡量做到讓考官看你的文章時可以簡單明瞭無痛閱讀如以做到這一點分數也就差不到那去了吧(至少一定不會成為扯你後腿的科目) 另外雖然很多人會說考試時時間太少寫大綱根本浪費時間關於這點我是持相反立場的我每一場考試都一定會寫大綱(確保中間不會寫一寫離題) 而且最後也至少都能剩10分鐘以上檢查兩篇作文關於我考writing時的策略如下: (1) 一定先寫下大綱！寫下各段基本論點及預計發展方向不要離題甚至可圈出主語提醒自己 (如題目是在「兒童」和「使用電腦」上不小心寫到「成人使用電腦」就會離題) (2) 提出thesis->進一步說明thesis的概念->舉例->details 很多時候作文的分數不高是因為立論模糊缺少舉例比方只有一堆空泛的形容詞和個人意見缺乏例證和客觀環境考量 (3) One paragraph, One idea! 這句不是我講的是之前一個專門教授作文的考官講的@@ 很多人會苦惱於寫作文時題材不夠但其實每篇作文基本上只要一個正面論點跟一個反面論點就很足夠啦因為每段一開始的主旨句在下的時候就限定了本段論辯的範圍寫超過主旨句提到的概念其實這段就算離題了除非你主旨句是寫"overuse computers有很多壞處" 接下來就可以一一舉例 (但採用這種結構要小心整段都在舉一堆例卻沒有充份延展、說明的問題) 否則主旨句寫"過份使用電腦會導致人們對於電腦太過依賴" 同一段寫著寫著又提出 "而且會引起很多生理上的疾病" 這樣主旨就沒包到全段拉囧 (4) Nature！文句儘量以自然為主不追求艱深抝口的難句可多變換同義字(EX: expert, specialist, professional…) 多變換句子結構(Ex: 名詞說法改動詞動態說法改名詞) "我私以為"英文還滿喜歡使用後謂修飾語的多使用限定子句(,which ,to a certain degree,)補充說明及多加限定adv/adj (currently, definitely, considerably, overwhelming.etc) 來增加句子具體程度和意境但一切還是以看起來舒服自然為主單字只要偶爾穿插幾個不錯的畫龍點睛一下即可 (EX:plight, indispensable, compromise, prolong someone's life…etc) 再次強調我每場考試都會寫下大綱大綱寫下來不會超過10個字其實花不了你多少時間卻可時時刻刻提醒你扣緊主軸讓你在文章還沒出發前就已經畫清楚本次的旅遊路線圖了我還滿常在剛拿到題目時不知道該寫啥如果可以順著順序一段一段寫下來當然最好但是中間如果卡關時時間就會一分一秒的過去了... 所以在寫下大綱清楚掌握這次的方向之後如果我寫幾句第二段寫得卡卡的我會先跳寫到第三段第三段如果還是卡卡的就寫一寫再跳到結論把結論先寫完至少這樣「開頭->正面->反面->結論」的骨架都先出來了最後只是慢慢再把文章的血肉填進去整體的結構就不會愈寫愈偏了~ (我用這種骨血肉的作法有次竟然還拿到7 囧!! 明明那次過程寫得超不順orz...) 最後附上我自己整理的一些經典好用句型給大家參考一下吧 1.Sth. leaves much to be desired 還有許多待改進之處 (我在problem/solve題型寫結論的必用句) 2.Constitute an essential part of my life (用以取代play an important role這老梗句) 3.Play an indispensible role in 不可或缺的角色 4.Sth. is inevitable 無可避免的 5.Unshirkable responsibility of sb. 無法逃避的責任 undertake responsibility 承擔責任 6.Primary reason / Primary cause 主要原因 7.Pose a great threat to 產生威脅 8.It is conceivable that 可想而知 (它的好朋友是It is understandable/It is reasonable/There is no doubt...) 9.It pays to 做...是值得的 10.Spare no effort to 不遺餘力 11.be closely/highly related to 與...息息相關 12.Get into the habit of... = make it a rule to... 養成...的習慣 13.enable sb. to do something... 使...能夠 14.On no account can we...我們絕對不能... 15.be superior to be inferior to be not inferior to 不亞於(<-一聽就很有層次感XD) 16.be forced / compelled / obliged to 不得不 17.Do one's utmost to...盡最大努力 (取代do one's best) 18.does good to 對...有好處 does harm to 造成傷害 19.hold the edge in... = dominant 占優勢的 20.take advantage of 1.利用 2.佔便宜 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 219.86.160.75

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