[閒聊] 剛看完獵人1~26心得加分享
1.重點人物一再出現,尼可羅會長,比司吉,傑諾.幻影旅團.
其實可以用一些新的人物來替代這些舊有的人,如果能以黑頁方式
讓他們出現來鋪梗就更好了.
這樣不但能夠在劇情上可以獲得更長的發展也可以拉出更多條副線.
2.進步太神速,雖然礙於主角威能的背景,但是小傑跟奇伢的進步,根本就威能了
這樣下去,他們如果把蟲打完還能活命的話,幻影可能也不是對手了.
這樣故事的話故事結構可能就掰掰了.
3.把蟲王寫的過於神話,如果說蟲王贏了,那我想也只有傑爸出面才有機會了.
如果蟲王輸了,那故事可以繼續,但小傑他們的對手,可能又要調強個幾百倍了.
從一開始獵人試驗的那幾個雜魚在被嵌合蟻滅團時,就想到說,他們能跟蟲打,
那蟲要是滅了他們去哪找人打.
4.故事沒有連接性可以被接受,就當作跟打副本一樣,但是當結構性跟內容性都跳脫掉
故事原本的架構時,就比較不能接受.
5.我只能說,希望富兼的休刊是為了把之後的劇情寫好,才不至於因為架構過於強大
而搞的本末倒置,無法自圓其說,而不是為了網路遊戲或者是因為賺飽了,所以走人了
6.各位一起通過獵人試練吧
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