Re: [攘夷] 我的英文作文
※ 引述《fishko1123 (黑鋼之鍊金術師)》之銘言：
: 啊啊，寫作文好麻煩，尤其是英文...百目鬼副長你說呢?(誤)
: 以下是全文(註:小孩子當然是寫小孩子作文，但我內心真的是大叔)
: My Pet
: I have a pet. It's a secret creature. Its name is Elizabeth. We got it
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改成I吧
: when we took the trip to Japan last summer vacation. Elizabeth owner before,
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改成I會比較通順,文章中we不知道指涉誰,所以改成I比較清楚
Elizabeth owner before改成Elizabeth's ex-owner會比較好懂
: Mr.Zura,told me seriously that I have to take good care of it.
: .
: It looks like a duck but its legs looks like human's. It also has hair on
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look
: its legs! It can't have voice but it can write what it thought on a white board
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改成thinks符合時態
: in Japanese. I have to improve my Japanese for talking with it fluently. It is
: a vegetarian. The drink it likes the best is vegetable juice.
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改成Vegetable juice is it's favorite dink.比較好懂也比較簡潔
: It is cute and also smart. I love it as my friend.
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文法上是沒錯,但改成It is not only cute but also smart.會好一點
或是直接用It is cute and smart.也很好
: 排版有點混亂，請加減看(跪)
: 大叔話翻譯版等我上完英文課會回來補充(被桂毆)
: 還有請不要把伊麗莎白當寵物看待，本篇是偷懶的錯誤示範
以上大叔閒閒沒事幹做的一些修改
沒有什麼冒犯的意思請見諒
因為我不想因此而被副長下令切腹...
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